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上海中考英語145（助力高中）免費助力上海學生中考英語達成145分以上，重點突破與達成以下目標：
1.聽說測試達到滿分（復(fù)述與表達），
2. 寫作達到A檔18分以上
3. 聽力語法詞匯閱讀達到扣分2分以內(nèi)
4. 為高中四大題型打基礎(chǔ)（翻譯與概要寫作、語法填空，詞匯填空和完形填空）
提示：
（1）上海中考聽說測試2023年開始將從目前的10分增加到15-20分，用來篩選學生的意圖更明顯。
（2）上海初中英語從2023年開始將改版，目前用了將近20年的牛津教材將成為歷史，而高中教材已于2020年率先改版，對學生的能力要求更上一個臺階。
今天開始發(fā)幾位基礎(chǔ)薄弱初三學生的作文修改（坐標：楊浦區(qū)內(nèi)最底層的學校之一，定位：100-110）
只有同輩作文，才能深有感觸；只有對比原文和我的修改稿，才能懂得寫作之道。請珍惜最最最干貨！
Take responsibility is important

修改前：
Take responsibility is important. My grandfather had a serious illness last year. It's a difficult time for my family. One day my grandmother was looking after my grandfather in the hospital. My mum was working. I had to stay home for a whole day. The floor is dirty and the rooms are messy. So I decided to clean the room by myself. First, clean my room and my desk. It cost me about fifteen minutes. Next, it took me twenty minutes to swept the floor and clean the living room. I emptied the rubbish bin at least. When my mum came back and saw that she was very surprised. At that time I realized I was no longer a child. I'm a teenage. It's time to take more responsibility for our family is important.

修改后
Last year, my grandfather was badly ill and had to stay in hospital for several weeks. It was a difficult time for my family because my mother, who did all the housework , was looking after my grandfather in the hospital. After a few days, the floor became dirty and all the rooms were in a mess. Seeing this, I decided to do a big clean-up by myself. Although it took me about two hours to sweep the floor and clean all the rooms , I felt a sense of achievement when I saw all the things were in order again. When I emptied the rubbish bins full of rubbish. At last, I knew taking care of a family is not easy. I was big enough to do something for it. When my mother came back and saw that, she was very proud of having such an understanding son. At that time, I realized that it's mportant for me to share more responsibility in our family. It not only helps my family share the hard work but also makes me more mature and responsible.

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